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However, the last sentence feels incomplete:
"Or is some love just not meant to stand the test of..."
It leaves the reader hanging without a clear resolution. Consider specifying what love is being tested against—time, ambition, or reality—to strengthen the impact. For example:
"Or is some love just not meant to stand the test of time and ambition?"
Overall, this blurb effectively draws readers in, but a clearer ending would make it even stronger.