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Diana

This was a beautiful peace of artwork. Which is strange to say about a story... I could imagine what was happening and I find myself imagining myself next to Aedynn, and scowling at Kovia. XD

3 years agoReply

So freaking epic cousin, I need to read more of this~ Your concept art doesn't do this justice.

I'll make a few suggestions to make the reading a little easier with grammar and large chunks of paragraph, so make sure to take the time to look through the suggestions. :)

8 years agoReply

SterlingWarrior03

Thanks for the constructive criticism, I was entirely happy with this chapter, but hopefully I'll be able to fix a few thing s up with the next chapter, and I'm happy you're enjoying it so far :)

8 years agoReply

@SterlingWarrior03, Is that supposed to be was or wasn't happy with this chapter?
And I have been waiting for this for a long time. OF COURSE I'M ENJOYING IT DAMMIT.

8 years agoReply

SterlingWarrior03

@CaitlinJHunter, XD I meant wasn't. See this is why you need to fix my grammar

8 years agoReply

The Virtual Shadow

the prologue is incredible. The theme and story are already great and i can see this clearly in my mind. Very well made.

8 years agoReply

SterlingWarrior03

Thank you so much! It's really nice to know that someone likes what I've done so far... Hopefully when I get the rest of the story up, it will be just as good :)

8 years agoReply

The Virtual Shadow

@SterlingWarrior03, I bet it will be. :)

8 years agoReply

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