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One criticism I'd like to point out though is that you suddenly switch to Cromwell's POV at some point in the chapter. I think it's better to stay in one POV so that it won't be confusing for readers. If you REALLY do need to switch POV's, it's good to indicate it with a break.
But other than that, amazing work! I always have trouble with historical fiction but I can easily tell you're such a natural at it! Fantastic job!!!
Quick question, were her co-defendants executed? Or will that be addressed in later chapters (perhaps I need to read ahead before posting, but I'm so intrigued!)