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歡樂熊
公主斷手了？
5 days agoReply
猴子李
是的......確確實實的被斬斷了 好痛啊......連下手的蕾茵都嚇一跳呢
4 days agoReply
雪燼
啊嘶～這帥氣救場就是我想要的啊😆
1 week agoReply
猴子李
神話魔狼登場 ～
1 week agoReply
猴子李
神話魔狼登場 ～
1 week agoReply
魯嚕嚕
斷、斷掉啦！超痛啊！😱

男主霸氣登場！氣場拉滿了！😎
1 week agoReply
猴子李
真的痛死 都慘叫了🥲


艾蓮雅：你哭啥還不是你安排的💢

猴子李：對…對不起
1 week agoReply
聞西
男主角的帽子，很適合將來有喜愛作品的人cosplay，夠帥夠可愛
1 week agoReply
猴子李
哈哈 但那個耳朵其實是男主本人的😂
1 week agoReply
聞西
@猴子李,哈哈，我表達錯了，我意思是玩cosplay的人，要載實體有耳朵的帽子😂
1 week agoReply
猴子李
@聞西,原來如此😂

那這樣我也會很期待coser們會用什麼毛質來裝飾😂
1 week agoReply
原子能
我想說埸景切換太頻繁了，但我的作品也有出現這個問題，而且有的讀者並不會認為這是問題，所以只是提個醒，我認為節奏處理的不錯，也有分鏡感，若有失禮還請見諒。
4 weeks agoReply
猴子李
這方面我最近也在審視呢… 目前正在思考該如何做處理 謝謝原子大提醒  有打算把這裡的編排做的統一一點

不會失禮啦～ 願意給我實質的建議和回饋是我要道謝才是呢！ 謝謝😊
4 weeks agoReply
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