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莉莉的身分多樣有趣(劍姬、軍團長、女僕、陰陽術師……)，但有點縫合感,感覺不是很自然，有點硬加上去的感覺，我不太會形容，也許是大大刻意為之或是之後的伏筆吧.
1 week agoReply
大秦書說人
被大俠發現了🤪
嗯，莉莉的身份其實很多都是後面才加的，原本只有一個女僕的的說
在下後面想想辦法修一下吧
5 days agoReply
五十五號試驗品
所以女僕莉莉是分身？
主體是絕軍劍姬卡蘭德？

一下子突然分不清楚
1 week agoReply
大秦書說人
莉莉的分身，硬要說的話是陰陽術的指偶式神
莉莉的秘密會等到東大陸的篇章揭曉
1 week agoReply
北海沙丁魚
軍裝又是另一種風情跟玩法啊😍

而且頭銜是真的帥 ( 是說大大中間打成劉涎香了w
1 week agoReply
大秦書說人
戰鬥女僕總是最棒的
哈哈，多謝大俠，軍裝可以玩條教之類的🤪
1 week agoReply
行姝
軍裝太帥了，我也喜歡軍裝😍
2 weeks agoReply
大秦書說人
軍裝真的很棒，有一種很颯的感覺
2 weeks agoReply
TING
如果要我選，我也會選軍裝，因為軍裝的莉莉很有氣勢，但可愛的傲嬌性格卻一點都沒少🤣
2 weeks agoReply
大秦書說人
可是女僕哎~🤪
哈哈，大俠喜歡性格強勢跟傲嬌的
2 weeks agoReply
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