I can only imagine the mischief these two could get into in the future! The story flows very smoothly, and the characters feel well rounded and personal so they could easily be built upon. Fantastic twin flame story!

I don't know how you consistently write such fun and imaginative contest entries. You have a knack for fitting a half-book's worth of worldbuilding into a short story by showing instead of telling. 

Reading your entries always feels like picking up a book and reading a chapter from the middle of it, without the feeling of having missed the earlier half.