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The Yobanashi Girouette

"Illegal mushrooms that make you see gods or talk to flaming goats"

Something tells me out protagonist got into his stash earlier X'D

But all in all, that was a fun read. There were a few grammatical errors, but that's a minor quibble. I found it interesting that the coarse, semi-vulgar narration fit our protagonist perfectly. Was the entire story actually one of his own tales?

2 hours agoReply

Cordelia

Haha yes, lets just say he may or may not have sampled the wizard’s mushroom stash. But the lightning was real, i swear by all flaming goats and chanting monks :,)

And thank you so much! yeah english is not my first language, but im glad its just minor mistakes :)

I think I see what you mean with the narration-style, I kinda imagined myself as an outside narrator, not Thaddeus himself.
Tbh, i just like to be vulgar and coarse once in a while bc im having way too much fun coming up with borderline absurdist stuff and characters like him are my perfect excuse to let loose once in a while haha
The input was great.

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