Geez, where was I looking at all this time?! This character building is impressive. So far, I love all the four. Have to go to bed now but can't wait to read further! (actually I should have gone to bed before the previous one but I just could not stop)
I liked how you chose a slightly different writing style for each character based on their character traits and their unique way of seeing the world..Luke for instance seems to be a thoughtful observer and one whose feelings are often expressed naturally through his body movements!:‘)