I think the prologue needs a little editing when it comes to punctuations and such, but overall, it’s very interesting. I like it when stories start off like this. The ending sent shivers down my spine. Are you planning on publishing this story?

I like the back story, beginning with theology and seperation. Any world is based off of differences more often than similarities, our unique signatures.

So Ive decided to change the prologue. Though i like this chapter, i just felt it wasnt exciting enough to draw in readers. So this will now be chapter one and ill write a new prologue. Though its gonna be a cliff hanger :)

A great overview! Brief and to the point. I only suggest cleaning up some of your sentences to make them more succinct and creating paragraphs so it's easier to digest.