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Curtis Durrenberger
In the summary , having it say A mysterious call from an unknown caller is kinda redundant

Try this : 

a mysterious call from persons unknown 
7 years ago
peter799
Thanks for the feedback. I'll consider it when I finish the story and revise it. :)
7 years ago
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