No Plagiarism!fSHlQgjaE22mG1AB0tQTposted on PENANA 回程嘅車上,一出大路就塞車,四條友困咗喺車龍中間,唔上唔落。8964 copyright protection587PENANANJh0LSAJT2 維尼
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阿星用手機睇咗下路況,嘆住氣咁講:「唉!前面炒車,今晚冇十點都睇怕返唔到去。」8964 copyright protection587PENANAegKkI7UA5p 維尼
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我坐喺後座仍然有好多問題,反正塞車冇嘢做,於是就問佢哋:「你話男人老狗,點解又會肯俾人潛規則?」8964 copyright protection587PENANAhqP7cL4gTe 維尼
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阿銘答:「呢啲買賣嚟㗎姐,一個出得起錢,一個想要錢,各取所需。」8964 copyright protection587PENANAWYqaGRFVBS 維尼
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「佢隨時唔係同志都唔出奇。」阿星百無聊賴咁握住軚講。8964 copyright protection587PENANAjad7JDyW2o 維尼
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我聽到眼都突埋,詫異咁講:「唔係吖嘛?」8964 copyright protection587PENANAE0q5QhWaiW 維尼
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「好出奇咩,佢只要陪石老闆幾年就夠喺北京二環買層千幾萬嘅樓,好多人成世人打工都搵唔到咁多錢。」阿星不以為然講。8964 copyright protection587PENANAgJlUBUyplv 維尼
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「聽落係有啲道理。」我似乎接受唔到:「但畀著我肯定唔得。」8964 copyright protection587PENANALShWqOJzB9 維尼
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阿銘笑咗笑講:「你唔要,大把人爭崩頭。」8964 copyright protection587PENANACicP2rHoSB 維尼
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「假如石老闆睇中你呢?」8964 copyright protection587PENANAV3QBgshoFk 維尼
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「咁呢程車你一定見我唔到。」阿銘笑住講。8964 copyright protection587PENANAtJ7Wa3hMaP 維尼
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全車人聽完之後都笑咗,最終呢程車真係十點左右先返到工作室。8964 copyright protection587PENANAqU4XpqCMd1 維尼
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翌日,阿星又開始忙改劇本,佢當時雖然拍晒心口話會搞掂,但改起上嚟都真係大工程,三日後終於又出咗一版新嘅大綱出嚟。8964 copyright protection587PENANAC9E4IEmZUl 維尼
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今次拍嘅係喜劇,但係喜劇好唔好睇,比起劇本其實更加著重喺個表演者身上,好似查理卓別林同Mr.Bean一樣係個表演者搞笑,同一個劇本搵其他人演出嚟,可能根本冇效果。8964 copyright protection587PENANAWzCpsshgWi 維尼
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特別係印象中嘅盛強畀我感覺成碌木咁,莫講話搞笑,連正常講對白都未必做得好。8964 copyright protection587PENANA2PYnhaQsHA 維尼
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我睇咗下寫喺白板上嘅重點問阿星:「咁樣寫,佢哋收貨㗎?」8964 copyright protection587PENANAdrWYY9L0wA 維尼
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「完全跟足要求,我諗石老闆應該會滿意呢版。」8964 copyright protection587PENANAMqdYOfUKVe 維尼
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「唔係掛,宜家成個故事又散又亂啵。」我聽完實在唔明。8964 copyright protection587PENANAxaza0xQsUE 維尼
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「沙士,我哋係商業編劇嚟,老闆想要咩我哋就畀咩,開到戲我哋先賺到錢,搞藝術我哋會死㗎,你明唔明啊?」8964 copyright protection587PENANALuhlRo4mYi 維尼
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「但都冇理由咁甩皮甩骨㗎……」8964 copyright protection587PENANAt5AJ63gNjX 維尼
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阿星又解釋道:「錯啦,你睇落甩皮甩骨姐,喺石老闆眼中呢份係按足佢要求出嘅劇本,好唔好睇係其次,最緊要係啱佢心水,滿足到要求佢先會拎錢出嚟開戲,大家先有工開,明唔明?我哋唔係藝術家啊沙士,我哋只不過一班揸筆乞食嘅寫手嚟。」8964 copyright protection587PENANAZ6pn8GYjvQ 維尼
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「石老闆嘅煤礦生意,每年都唔知賺幾多億,網大投資嗰幾百萬對佢嚟講真係濕濕碎,投得呢啲劇本都係另有所圖,就算蝕錢都冇咩所謂,因為打從一開始佢就唔係為咗賺錢而嚟。」8964 copyright protection587PENANAipbQAoLaRO 維尼
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「但係……」我都係有啲於心不忍:「如果佢哋拍出嚟好難睇咁點?」8964 copyright protection587PENANAK45E8JWQN6 維尼
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「咁係拍嗰邊功力不足啦,到時就唔關我哋事。」8964 copyright protection587PENANAPdHxgnwpts 維尼
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「但係編劇個名落你㗎啵!唔驚以後冇人搵你寫咩?」8964 copyright protection587PENANAx71VqTEl8x 維尼
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「邊有人睇戲會留意編劇㗎?觀眾一係就留意演員,二就係導演,三可能已經係配樂美術嗰啲。」8964 copyright protection587PENANAO1vJo2ECzg 維尼
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阿星又問:「魔盜王有冇睇啊?」8964 copyright protection587PENANAnrzMNeCJka 維尼
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我即刻應佢:「有!傑克船長吖嘛!超鍾意!」8964 copyright protection587PENANA5PV5GzDAVV 維尼
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「咁我問你,套嘢嘅編劇叫咩?」8964 copyright protection587PENANAxMP6nnwiVt 維尼
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「吓?」我個腦當堂打結。8964 copyright protection587PENANAYZ4MxUzDfB 維尼
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莫講話編劇,套嘢我連導演係邊個都未知。8964 copyright protection587PENANAtndOyLLIB7 維尼
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阿星一見就講:「你睇!個個都淨係會記得尊尼特普,其他人搵鬼會理咩!」8964 copyright protection587PENANAMwm6f5WyN4 維尼
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我聽完以後都點頭:「你咁講都好似有啲道理……」8964 copyright protection587PENANATxOb9dWVrz 維尼
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阿星又講:「同埋冇人叫你用真名㗎嘛!」8964 copyright protection587PENANAflcDaJnUEN 維尼
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「吓?可以唔用㗎咩?」8964 copyright protection587PENANAoGYUT0V014 維尼
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「點解唔可以?藝人都可以用藝名,你做咩唔可以用其他筆名?」8964 copyright protection587PENANAhCk3rS92XA 維尼
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我聽完放下心頭大石,笑道:「又係啵!」8964 copyright protection587PENANAA8blNMYBxs 維尼
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個心放開咗啲,不斷催眠自己,從此對將來可能要靠寫爛片搵食少咗一份心理負擔。8964 copyright protection587PENANAds8L3UxpZT 維尼
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結果新嘅呢版分場大綱真係同阿星所講嘅一樣,石老闆睇完之後相當滿意,阿星佢哋都可以向下一階段進發。8964 copyright protection587PENANAag7oY6xRSo 維尼
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原本就應該進入劇本階段,我跟咗差唔多成個月終於可以近距離觀察一份劇本係點樣完成!8964 copyright protection587PENANATESzno9v21 維尼
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不枉我做咗成個月跑腿,又搵咗一個月資料,捱到呢一步證明我嘅努力係冇白費!8964 copyright protection587PENANAlpVG81YJkJ 維尼
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正當我如常喺開會時間,打開電腦坐好準備做記錄嗰時,阿星突然同我講:「唔洗啦。」8964 copyright protection587PENANA4g5i5YeW4S 維尼
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我嚇咗一跳:「吓?點解唔洗?又話石老闆嗰邊過咗?」8964 copyright protection587PENANAdCb0gtkmTp 維尼
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「係過咗啊!我意思係跟住落嚟你唔洗幫手啦!」8964 copyright protection587PENANAxEppHrpPLa 維尼
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我聽完仲震驚,即刻追問:「我係咪做錯咗乜嘢?」8964 copyright protection587PENANAgzvp21PuyV 維尼
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「唔係啊!乜你諗嘢咁負面嘅!」阿星皺眉講。8964 copyright protection587PENANAXrVEnqNefb 維尼
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「咁你失驚無神走埋嚟叫我唔洗再幫手,我咁諗都好正常啫……」8964 copyright protection587PENANA1Qf08mVuEQ 維尼
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「唔係你諗嗰樣。」阿星又講:「係導演叫嘅,佢話你差唔多返香港,叫我哋休息一下,陪你出去玩幾日。」8964 copyright protection587PENANAV39qLEY0LD 維尼
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我睇下手機日期,原來不知不覺間已經嚟到十二月尾,一個月實習期差唔多到,我都係時候要返香港交實習報告。8964 copyright protection587PENANA2Nj5AGQs1o 維尼
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冇諗過呢段日日俾人點去做嘢嘅日子會過得咁快,雖然絕大部份時間都留咗喺工作室入面,但學到嘅嘢我相信比上堂三年學到嘅仲要多。8964 copyright protection587PENANA76AbDdBmjq 維尼
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明明攰到死,但真係要走嗰下居然會有啲唔捨得。8964 copyright protection587PENANAndtNpT3B7K 維尼
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阿星見我呆咗喺度,於是講:「嚟緊幾日工作室都會休息,你想去邊度玩即管開聲。」8964 copyright protection587PENANAjW82GW3QXE 維尼
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講完佢就返咗入房,得返我一個喺客廳。8964 copyright protection587PENANAbE6ZC25agt 維尼
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