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[你揀我寫]一人一個追女心得 合力改變A0命運
ISSUE #153
Author: 黑犬風易
[你揀我寫]一人一個追女心得 合力改變A0命運
Author: 黑犬風易
ISSUE #153
延續前篇
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黑哂嘅畫面只係閃現咗一秒。

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下一秒，我見到張月星。

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但係，係一臉都係血嘅張月星。

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佢個樣好驚，成個人睇落係搖搖欲墜嘅。

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我想叫佢，但係可惜我出唔到聲。

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突然，畫面又再一黑。

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一切，好似相機快門眨動，閃咗一閃。

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畫面，切換咗。

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我唔知自己去咗邊，但係感覺到一陣清涼嘅感覺。

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精準啲講，我其實感受唔到清涼，但係我個心境喺呢個環境係有呢一種感覺嘅。

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而呢個時候，我見到，有一個人，坐咗喺我身邊。

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係長頭髮嘅。

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我自然咁覺得呢個人係張月星，所以想拍一拍佢膊頭。

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當然，同之前一樣，我想做嘅行動，都係做唔到嘅。

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只不過，雖然我拍唔到佢膊頭，但係我身邊嘅人，慢慢轉緊個頭過嚟。

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吓，呢個人，唔係張月星。

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徐一一。

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佢望住我，臉上掛住咗一個淡然、無奈嘅笑容。

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然後，開口講咗啲嘢。

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但係，喺呢個似係幻覺嘅狀態入面，我完全聽唔到佢講咩。

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「大聲啲，我聽唔到啊！！！！」1258Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJt0hV47yEo

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我好努力咁叫，當然，係完全無聲嘅。

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當我想仔細咁再望一次佢講緊咩嘅時候，畫面，再次一黑。

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「先生，先生！」

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我耳邊出現一把男人聲。

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我打開眼，發現自己企咗喺一堆燈籠中間。

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而我眼前，有一個公園嘅工作人員。

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當佢見到我打開眼，立即就問：「你無事吖嘛？洗唔洗幫你叫白車？」

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我遲疑咁搖頭，望一望周邊環境。

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無張月星、無徐一一、無血。

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我立即講聲「唔好意思」，然後就離開咗公園。1258Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiFiURygoPn

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我望住自己手上燈籠「平安」兩個細字。

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心入面，不期然咁諗緊好多嘢。

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平安，係咪代表張月星知道自己有咩不測？

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之前從未喺自己嘅幻覺見過徐一一，唔通徐一一同張月星嘅危險有關？

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徐一一好似有啲嘢同我講，到底佢講咗咩呢？

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當我思緒混亂之際，我感受到個電話震動。

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咦，係雲宛澄。

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【選擇時間】各位巴打絲打，我應該做啲咩好呢？

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C. 唔理雲宛澄，但係打俾張月星1258Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjrloTwvbSn
D. 唔理雲宛澄，但係打俾徐一一

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（請在留言處留下你的選擇，

最快有留言達到四票將會成為故事發展的後續，

假如平手，將會以較快一票作為標準，

歡迎大家在留言區先討論再作選擇！）

（如在09：00前未夠票數，故事將自動由作者續寫）

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每天大約2-3個劇情，但到達獎勵目標，將可以幫助故事增加更新速度/打開各種隱藏資料！所以睇故事之餘，大家記得Like哂每一篇故事啊！

下一個獎勵目標：3300 likes

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以下是我的IG帳戶，大家有興趣可以去到那邊催促我更新，而且還有這個故事的「作者前言」！1258Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoBpjXZEjon
IG : windblowssilently

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[你揀我寫]一人一個追女心得 合力改變A0命運
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Last updated: Jan 22, 2024
Total word count: 207,376
Total reading time: 691 Minutes
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香港作家 愛情故事 黑犬風易 默颺 互動故事 選擇故事 追女仔
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