CHAPTER FIVE29Please respect copyright.PENANACuszsSnjeL
The bell had rung twice already, but Musa hadn’t moved from the window. His shirt clung damply to his back, sweat from a sleepless night and the kind of fear that doesn't shake off by morning. 29Please respect copyright.PENANAKa5dnz42Kl
The compound outside was waking up slowly—boys yelling half-hearted insults across the quad, buckets slamming against concrete at the water taps, the usual mtu ni mechi leo! —indicating a laid-back, carefree bravado bouncing between Form Fours.29Please respect copyright.PENANAjA5XfMs4e8
But he wasn’t hearing any of it.29Please respect copyright.PENANAVomW80Z3eV
His eyes were fixed on the far wall.29Please respect copyright.PENANApN0urZPkDh
The one they called dunda.29Please respect copyright.PENANAlwAKLolttn
Not its real name, of course. But among a few of them—the ones who’d listened more than they talked—it meant something. A place where things crossed. Notes. Looks. Sometimes, people.29Please respect copyright.PENANAq93KdcIqW0
And last night, they’d crossed it.29Please respect copyright.PENANAO9rsPujfbT
He still felt the burn in his arms from pulling himself up and over. Still heard the sharp breath of Otieno behind him, limping on the way back from that forbidden path.29Please respect copyright.PENANAxHOHAsVbdE
Musa turned from the window, eyes falling on the side pocket of his school bag.29Please respect copyright.PENANAe70IhPAUX4
Inside, folded carefully between the cover of a torn CRE exercise book, was the first letter.29Please respect copyright.PENANAjQ92lsMTRF
"To the girl with the sunflower hair ribbon..."29Please respect copyright.PENANAyjFFS71Bid
He never got to send it. Someone had beaten him to the wall.29Please respect copyright.PENANAS4Te26SeGY
But now it was too late.29Please respect copyright.PENANAxCjNqLp0B0
Because last night, something changed. For months now, Musa had crossed it.29Please respect copyright.PENANAYaOTERSCFE
Quietly. Carefully.29Please respect copyright.PENANAcbDAqvmBZO
Never to meet anyone specific. Not at first. It had started with passing notes, coded jokes, half-written lyrics, little trades. Some of the girls would meet them at the vines in the wall during preps or when the bell rang late. Never faces. Just fingers passing folded paper. Voices whispered through leaves.29Please respect copyright.PENANA6vtfNX1IoC
And sometimes… more. Otieno had someone. Musa had... no one.29Please respect copyright.PENANA3QCdBYvI9t
Except the smile.29Please respect copyright.PENANAcpaYWbSQAo
That one smile. From the Madaraka Day parade a year back. She had stood there, yellow ribbon in her hair, laughing quietly at something her friend whispered. That moment had carved itself into him like a signature on wet cement.29Please respect copyright.PENANAbh5bJ2ZZUX
He had crossed the wall five times since that day. Whispered with at least three different girls. Swapped lines of poetry he barely understood. But never her.29Please respect copyright.PENANA27br1DLZ2t
Never the girl with the sunflower ribbon.29Please respect copyright.PENANAym7tCEOGdQ
And as his feet hit the ground, he whispered to himself—barely louder than the wind:29Please respect copyright.PENANAbU2ecJwGyY
“I’ll find you. One day.”29Please respect copyright.PENANA9XB3NjJFI2
He didn’t know her name. Never heard her speak. But he remembered her.29Please respect copyright.PENANATmwQJtk7PI
It had been during the Jamhuri Day inspection the year before, when both schools were assembled on the Jaramogi Oginga Odinga Sports Complex grounds. The sun had been brutal, melting through blazers and brows, the kind of heat that blurred vision and time.29Please respect copyright.PENANATyUbhkV5bg
Boys stood in lines on one side of the field. Girls on the other. A gulf of baked red earth between them. She had been near the front of the girls’ group—second or third row. Her posture was sharper than the rest. Back straight, eyes forward, the kind of discipline that made a student stand out.29Please respect copyright.PENANAVYM8UrZBNR
But what caught Musa wasn’t how she stood. It was what she wore.29Please respect copyright.PENANAoYlYaVx4KW
A yellow ribbon, tied around her bun.29Please respect copyright.PENANA8xA5umpJFj
Not school regulation. Not loud either. But defiant.29Please respect copyright.PENANAkcZ6MO3flQ
A silent flare of color in a world that punished difference.29Please respect copyright.PENANA3SRHIVBVJz
And then—she laughed.29Please respect copyright.PENANAKJeBzU4NFo
Quickly, quietly. Her friend must have whispered something. Her hand flew to her mouth, but the smile broke through. Just for a second. He saw it from across the field and something about it cracked open a window inside him.29Please respect copyright.PENANAgw521nFBzo
She didn’t look his way. Probably never would.29Please respect copyright.PENANAZvRbrfPktI
But from that day on, when he walked past the far end of the wall—the part the girls called dunda too—he always slowed his steps.29Please respect copyright.PENANAUU02Kso6NK
Just a little.29Please respect copyright.PENANAEp3sybKAZV
In case something waited on the other side
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THE WALL OF CARDS
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Eddie Otieno

ISSUE #6
In the stillness of the night, truths are neither seen nor said—but known.
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