So as you know, I had come to the accord of writing every four chapters in Cassian's POV. And every time I write in his POV I add more of his family, and more of his background and more of the Covenant itself. Well while writing, I did write chapter 14 in his POV, and kept telling myself 'okay in four more chapters you write in his POV again' over and over again. Until the day actually came, and I was so focused on the writing I didn't even notice that I did a big mistake. So! Yes I did focus on his inner turmoil, and yes I did make him have a mental breakdown. So for the most part it was him, just that I put both their points of views in it. So chapter 20 will be about Cassian's inner life, and will be focused on a lot of things, mostly deep things. So if you're like sensitive to the following--> Abusive aspects of family life, SH mentions (yes this chapter is gonna be packed), generational trauma, highly powerful mentions on other wordly being and magic (that's just if you're like really serious about it), amongst other things I advise you to read carefully. 29Please respect copyright.PENANAg8lUGtkkHk
I'll do my best to tone it down just a bit, but not too much. A lot of plot twists are coming as well, and other things. But yes, maybe the mistake of me going over who knows what will actually contribute to the story when I make it an actual manuscript. So thanks for all the love and support on Afterlight Burn ^^ LOVE YOU GUYS!!!
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ISSUE #8
A WRITING MISTAKE (BUT MAYBE NOT AN ACCIDENT?!)
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