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【最精實的詞作訓練】第一堂課：骨架
ENTRY #2
Author: 小魚一尾
Published:
Jan 30, 2026
【最精實的詞作訓練】第一堂課：骨架
Published:
Jan 30, 2026
ENTRY #2
完整組——也許從一開始就該消失
Author: 小魚一尾
Published:
Jan 30, 2026
1 Min Read
356 Words
No Plagiarism!7gXAZWGiTrhA6iTh9JNcposted on PＥNAＮＡ

太多不該說出的話

從未盛開過的花朵或許一開始就不該發芽

太枯燥的過程

空白的診斷書

不明白人要走到哪裡才算是勝利

握不住的筆

抓不住的意義

褪色的記憶

或許從一開始就該消失的吧

172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjcKTs8SDSS

我抓著我殘存的人生過程

求一個成全

或許生命總是不圓滿

但為何我的月從來沒全過

就只想消散在一片虛無中

我也想等待啊 等待啊

等到春暖花開

可是為什麼———我只等到了孤身一人

172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFdskJvJveT

或許從一開始就該消失的吧172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPrc3QFM9mP

或許從一開始就該消失的吧

對不起 我學不會揮灑我的花樣年華

對不起  我學不會說出漂亮的滿分回答

對不起我學不會自在瀟灑

172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg7I3yiyd2E

如果生命可以隨波逐流

如果生命可以切斷無盡憂愁

如果痛苦可以停留

如果我能讓別人牽我的手

或許我就不需要消失

或許我可以站在原地

172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF7mypN47dA

如果生命不可以隨波逐流

如果生命不可以切斷無盡憂愁

如果痛苦不可以停留

如果我不能讓別人牽我的手繼續走

172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9HQ2RY1HB0

那就請放開我的手

不要   不想  懸吊在徒勞的希望和溫柔

那就請讓 我走

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