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【最精實的詞作訓練】第一堂課：骨架
ENTRY #8
Author: OI
Published:
Feb 20, 2026
【最精實的詞作訓練】第一堂課：骨架
Published:
Feb 20, 2026
ENTRY #8
副歌組-船歌
Author: OI
Published:
Feb 20, 2026
1 Min Read
250 Words
No Plagiarism!5Ksjtb1V94CuuJZqrCiTposted on PＥNAＮＡ

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海風已經吹滿黑帆 日出時我看見家鄉的海岸

帶著遠方閃閃發光的人魚蛋 日出時我踏上家鄉的沙灘

海風已經吹滿黑帆 日出時我看見家鄉的海岸

穿著曾經清淨的襤褸衫 日落前海神的酒桶就該倒滿

02

海風吹滿黑帆 日落時我看見家鄉的海岸

帶著遠方巨大無比的鯨魚肝 日落時我踩上熟悉的甲板

海風已經吹滿黑帆 日落時我看見家鄉的海岸

睡著永遠滑膩的海藻枕 日出後海神就是我的死神

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海風已經吹滿黑帆 出航時我看見家鄉的海岸

身邊是我親愛的水手崽子們 風起時我還要回到港口結婚

海風已經吹滿黑帆 返航時我看見家鄉的海岸

身邊是我親愛的水手們 風停時海神就是我們的死神

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