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【最精實的詞作訓練】第一堂課：骨架
ENTRY #11
Author: 蘇禕
Published:
Mar 23, 2026
【最精實的詞作訓練】第一堂課：骨架
Published:
Mar 23, 2026
ENTRY #11
完整組：《凌晨三點鐘的便利商店》
Author: 蘇禕
Published:
Mar 23, 2026
1 Min Read
429 Words
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（靈感由 Gemini (AI) 提供）

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[Intro]

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[Verse 1]

凌晨三點鐘的便利商店 叮咚叮咚一直響

是不是聖誕老人來報到 叮噹叮噹多響亮

門口有一隻小白鴨 門下老鼠吱吱叫

一個老人家在門旁 穿著睡衣哪有床

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[Pre-Chorus]

門口還在叮咚響 明明不是聖誕節叮叮噹

歡迎光臨經常講 這些非日常都別再假裝

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[Chorus]

凌晨三點鐘全家是你家蕃薯香

平時早七晚十一對著報紙冥想

今夜玻璃窗前看著去年的晚報

金融海嘯留職停薪魷魚吃到飽

若喜提來而富 O.K.明年回家鄉

日子苟且偷生 能安太座造假象

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[Interlude]

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[Verse 2]

凌晨三點鐘的便利商店 叮咚叮咚一直響

是不是聖誕老人來報到 叮噹叮噹多響亮

門口白鴨 門下老鼠 率先離場

那位老人 說句晚安 靠牆睡下

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[Bridge]

多希望

步步高升 金榜題名 鴻圖大展 祖上添光

桌子一張張 沒有老人呼嚕迴響

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[Chorus]

凌晨三點鐘全家是你家蕃薯香

平時早七晚十一對著報紙冥想

今夜玻璃窗前看著去年的晚報

金融海嘯留職停薪魷魚吃到飽

若喜提來而富 O.K.明年回家鄉

日子苟且偷生 能安太座造假象

142Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk1FEosNIfL

[Outro]

凌晨三點鐘的便利商店

你好歡迎光臨 門沒有故障 座位空蕩蕩

他們有班可上 天天有便當 從此不假裝

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音樂：

Title: 凌晨三點鐘的便利商店

Lyrics: 蘇禕

Music: Suno (AI)

URL: https://youtu.be/pjNTGxvtbHE

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