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【最精實的詞作訓練】第一堂課：骨架
ENTRY #16
Author: 無法聯繫
Published:
Mar 31, 2026
【最精實的詞作訓練】第一堂課：骨架
Published:
Mar 31, 2026
ENTRY #16
《平凡不平凡》——完整組
Author: 無法聯繫
Published:
Mar 31, 2026
1 Min Read
302 Words
No Plagiarism!8cgFHs36CeTFXHqcVEb2posted on PＥNAＮＡ 164Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOaFzZq1yWb

抽屜凌亂的功課

口沫橫飛的冀著

預示著未來選擇

164Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4ei3XYpEXZ

一筆一劃的興奮

笑容燦爛著天真

我們看著望著堅信著

164Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPn8LQ5DGT3

他們說 天空蔚藍 是自由翱翔

他們畫 完美藍圖 說這是夢想

我一無反顧向前奔跑 在路口煞了腳

可沒人說過人類無法飛翔

164Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYQKH6iJ0oB

錢得了 夢散了 在泥沼裡翻來覆著

是哭了 是笑了 後來再無情感波折

倔著一口氣不願承認

天真的心已碎的透徹

164Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIPuUglNZVL

天亮了 天暗了 再也無法看清顏色

你說著 他說著 妥協在內心裡翻騰

奠祭無數次的夢想

換來一世無風無浪

164Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI419ArplKM

作文題上瀟瀟灑灑

現實路上絆絆磕磕

泛黃的紙 褪色的字 誰還記得角落的真摯

164Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm4mNz6PO42

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好久沒上來了w

教學寫的超好，雖然感覺腦袋會了但手看起來還需要一點時間XD

第一次寫歌詞，感覺有點匠氣哈哈

本來以為截止前都騰不出時間寫，但謝謝晝兒舉辦的創挑讓我有機會接觸沒試過的領域♪( ´▽｀)164Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIA2Um2z2xw

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