Part 1: The Reaper of Midnight
Greetings. I am Ahmed and this is a tale stitched together with dread, brotherhood, and the kind of suspense that lingers long after the journey ends.
The final stop of our holiday adventure was never meant to become a story whispered in lowered voices.
Yet that is exactly what it became.
At the heart of it all were four friends who were bounded, not by sameness, but by something far stronger.
As the sky turned deep indigo and the first stars appeared, my friends arrived one by one. Their laughter echoed, but it carried something else—an unease, as if the night itself was listening.
There was Peter from Sialkot. He was sharp, calculating, a businessman who read markets like open books. Amit from Hyderabad, having calm and grounded personality, tied deeply to ancestral farmlands. Diljeet from Nankana Sahib,who was a disciplined police officer who walked the fine line of law.
And then there was me—Ahmed from Karachi, a private detective, always searching for truths others prefer hidden.
Different faiths. Different cities. Different lives.
Yet one bond.
We were sons of Pakistan. In every December, no matter where life took us, we returned to each other. We preserved our holidays and worked tirelessly for 11 months to wait for that month to come so that we could spend our holidays in travelling, staying in hotels, eating, touring and enjoying every day of December and the arrival of Christmas always doubled the excitement.
That year, I hosted the opening gathering.
The moment the door opened, the years between us vanished. We embraced like boys again and the time gap looked irrelevant.
Tea was already waiting. So were stories.
Laughter flowed easily—childhood mischief, career disasters, small victories. Time slipped unnoticed until we moved to dinner, where Mohsin(my cook) had prepared a feast rich with spice and warmth.
Later, beneath a star-filled sky, we walked through quiet streets, revisiting old journeys and forgotten dreams.
And then, the idea came.
“What if,” I said, “we hitchhike through the Himalayan range… deep into Pakistani Kashmir?”
Silence.
Then curiosity.
Peter’s eyes lit up. Amit nodded slowly.
Diljeet hesitated.
But only briefly.
“Alright,” he said. “Let’s do it.”
That should have been the end of it.
But it wasn’t.
Because of the bag.
Compact. Tactical. Unusual.
When we asked, Diljeet only smiled faintly.
“Don’t ask. You’ll know when the time comes.”
We let it go.
Maybe we trusted him too much.
Or maybe we trusted ourselves too much.
Because we had always believed in truth over superstition.
We had once dismantled the infamous ghost story of Karsaz Road. Spent nights chasing rumors, questioning witnesses, exposing exaggerations. When we were certain it was false, we distributed pamphlets, urging people to stop fearing shadows.
We believed the unknown could always be explained.
We were wrong.
That night, I had prepared the garden for something special. Soft lights glowed along the walls. Four beds lay beneath the open sky, arranged close enough for conversation.
When my friends saw it, their exhaustion faded.
We lay beneath the stars, talking endlessly.
Midnight came and went unnoticed.
With my family away, the house had been too quiet lately.
But not anymore.
That night, it breathed again.
We slipped back into childhood. The days when all four of us were children and used to live in the officers’ colony where we grew up. We were the sons of army men, raised on discipline and adventure.
Then came food—kebabs, fries, burgers, fish, almonds.
We ate without restraint. Laughed without hesitation.
And when sleep finally came, it came gently.
Morning followed just as softly.
At 9:00 a.m., we woke almost in unison. Discipline still lingered in us.
Breakfast awaited—halwa puri, samosas, strong tea.
We gathered again, not just for food—but for something deeper.
Memory. Loyalty. Belonging.
And in that moment, I felt it clearly—This was what mattered.
Not the journey ahead.
But this.
Four friends. One bond.
Unbreakable.
Or so we believed.
We left soon after breakfast.
No hesitation.
No second thoughts.
Bags packed. Supplies checked.
And then—Rosy.
Our rose-red 2015 jeep stood ready in the driveway, a machine filled with history. Every scratch told a story.
I ran my hand across her hood before starting the engine.
First destination: Mehran Highway.
Fuel—full.
Engine—tuned.
Tires—checked.
Tools—packed.
Four spare tires. Food. Water.
Preparedness was not paranoia.
It was survival.
We locked the house and drove out.
I took the first shift. Peter sat beside me with the map. Amit and Diljeet settled in the back.
Hyderabad came soon.
At the checkpoint, we slowed. IDs checked. Inspection done.
Then we moved forward.
The landscape opened into rivers, canals, and green fields. It was calm. Beautiful.
Amit leaned forward, sharing stories of Nawabshah—roadside stalls, strange encounters, local rumors.
Then he added casually, “We should reach before sunset… unless you want to meet dacoits.”
We laughed.
But not fully.
Each of us carried licensed firearms.
Not dramatic.
Just necessary.
When my shift ended, Diljeet took over.
Surprisingly calm.
Measured.
The road curved deeper into quieter terrain.
Then Amit spoke again—quieter this time.
“There are stories here… not exactly human.”
Peter frowned. “Like what?”
“Shape-shifters,” Amit said. “Ichchha Dhari Naags.”
He explained—serpent beings who could take human form. A legend of a family who sheltered them and received a powerful jewel in return.
“And when they sold it,” he said, “they became unbelievably rich.”
Silence filled the jeep.
Outside, the fields felt… still.
Peter finally asked, “You believe that?”
Amit shrugged. “Stories survive for a reason.”
Soon, Amit took the wheel.
The milestone to Nawabshah drew closer.
The mood shifted.
Jokes faded.
The sun dipped lower.
Golden light stretched across the land, turning everything into shadow and silhouette.
Dusk felt… different.
Uncertain.
As if the world itself was changing shifts.
Diljeet requested the final drive.
“I’ll take us in.”
There was something in his tone.
Not excitement.
Not fear.
Something else.
Something steady.
The sky deepened into violet and amber.
And then—We saw it.
A milestone.
Standing alone at the roadside.
We leaned forward.
We had arrived.
We had arrived to the hotel that we already booked.
Or at least, we thought we had.
Because something about that moment felt wrong.
Too quiet.
Too still.
As if the land itself was watching us.
Waiting.
Were we stepping closer to truth—Or walking straight into a trap?
The answer had already begun unfolding.
Whether we were ready…
Or not.
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