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詞韻無言
ISSUE #451
Author: 霧飄山亭
詞韻無言
Author: 霧飄山亭
ISSUE #451
第四百五十一章<<繫裙腰.針兒>>
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簾掛迓，打量線繩提，檻窗介介。

是亮銀絲繫，回文彩字都怪，織錦鋪滿壞。

園宵煙花敗，淡淡影，徙倚離懷，玉筯搖戴。

針乃。

慢揉觸細，總牾年光經過快。

靜留下、楸枰線黑，庭燎爚旁帶。

別君謾待，畀寸寸、歸期牽擺。

怎往返，段恨長愁不解。

(解釋)

詠針。

第5-6句：化用<<璇璣圖>>之典

第8-10句：寫針織布時如人影淡淡，徘徊往返，而針牽著的線就如人的淚

第14-15句：寫布如棋盤上的線，而針就如旁邊的燭

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音樂版

[粵韻填詞入曲]《織布針線》(原詞：《繫裙腰》)(粵語版)

[粵韻填詞入曲]《織布針線》(原詞：《繫裙腰》)

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其他

[粵韻填詞入曲]《星座傳說》(原詞：《如夢令》)(粵語版)

[粵韻填詞入曲]《星座傳說》(原詞：《如夢令》)

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詞韻無言
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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 60,424
Total reading time: 201 Minutes
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