貓的二三事 - 16.02 反饋與補完

感謝讀者 D 幫忙腦力激盪，補完大結局❣️

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D：倪詠晨上一章還在準備實行計劃，下一章卻已比抓去逼供🤣 純粹覺得好突然🤣

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貓：倪詠晨只負責構思重點，執行方面不可以由他出面，否則便會違反 Janus 的僱員合約。亦正因如此，即使被逼供他也不知悉細節，無法洩密。1025Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7xewbWfDjM
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D：對。不過下一章便已被抓去好快 XD1025Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHgwUEoNnll
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貓：其實這個骨節眼確實有躊躇過要如何描寫過場細節，是否要詳細講述他們逐一接觸金主勸退，然後金主質問 Janus 後一一撒資？無奈這些細節沉悶之餘對推進劇情幫助不大，最後便決定直接進入戲肉。1025Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoYEBdez2qu
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D：的確，勸退過程沒有必要。但硬是覺得轉場缺了些甚麼🤔 若是劇集的話，這樣接下集劇情其實沒甚麼影響🤣🤣1025Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTb8Y1JzdN9
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貓：可能在周家萱的內心感受著墨吧🤔

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D：可能加多幾句已足夠🤔X月後，狗急跳牆，抓詠晨，之後逼供🤔1025Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2spfxkihaM
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貓：周家萱本身的人設屬心狠手辣型，大概不會被大老闆逼迫至走投無路，反而被老闆揶揄直言太高估她，後悔挖角累公司一鋪清袋，周家萱深深不忿要查出是誰令她身敗名裂更合理🤔

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就這樣，成為了現時的結局版本。感謝大家一直以來的意見和反饋，令《少女黑客》變得更完整🙏🏻❤️

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