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楓語一角
ISSUE #7
Author: 水無月 楓
Published:
Mar 10, 2022
楓語一角
Author: 水無月 楓
Published:
Mar 10, 2022
ISSUE #7
遣詞用字
No Plagiarism!KJP8lPOTgEhRdPMlRDWLposted on PＥNAＮＡ

似乎以後也別亂給別人修文的建議....520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3dhohN00Oj

原來我自己的也錯漏百出520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqHPN0NkCQQ

怪不得沒什麼人看520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡITRIVjnBBL

更沒人有回應了！520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdvIkerXpfp

====節錄一下朋友看完#14的回應====520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtI8V8WllcV

水無月 楓 (22/3/11 04:04):如果可以，請分享看完的感覺👀🙇🙇520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqbDj2Kn7Tk

水無月 楓 (22/3/11 04:05):因為我聽住歌來寫，所以感覺可能與實際的不同@@

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C妹 (22/3/11 10:12):

有啲字多了，可以唔使用

有啲句子倒轉寫會順返你接住下一句

有啲句子用錯標點符號

有啲字眼，我唔知你想用咩文法寫

台灣？香港？

如果用香港就寫簡單字形容就得

如果你唔係香港

係用台灣個d寫句子/字就無問題

但某啲形容詞就深左

可以用其他形容詞

純粹個人意見

520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy62YW9VTqW

水無月 楓 (22/3/11 10:52):謝細閱及分享

水無月 楓 (22/3/11 10:53):所以在這錯漏百出的文體下，似乎帶不出想要的意境了

520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKLDormENCt

C妹 (22/3/11 11:11):

>>水無月 楓 (22/3/11 10:53):

>>所以在這錯漏百出的文體下，似乎帶不出想要的意境了

帶到

重要寫得好

只係有少少改就得

520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEoont6hJUf

C妹 (22/3/11 11:12):

不過未諗到嗆鼻個句點修飾下

C妹 (22/3/11 11:15):

“可能我不小心露出嫌惡的樣子嗎？”

理句

可以改

是我不小心露出嫌惡的樣子了嗎？

咁用問號

如果你理句唔改

個問號就用錯了

520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiuKqJdIHJX

 C妹 (22/3/11 11:17):

我不敢與之對望

改為

我不敢與他對望

簡單易明

520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzqO9SzWog4

麥野豬 (22/3/11 11:17):

其實我覺得

重點係要寫多啲

隻手未練到可以寫到心諗嘅嘢出嚟

520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ2bedssCdP

C妹 (22/3/11 11:18):

我自己寫完一段

會不停讀順去改

所以都改好耐😂

好多時會塞住

520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMz4clWgWGC

水無月 楓 (22/3/11 12:22):

>>麥野豬 (22/3/11 11:17):

>>其實我覺得

>>重點係要寫多啲

>>隻手未練到可以寫到心諗嘅嘢出嚟

我念到果句就打果句

520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXi5JUs1adT

水無月 楓 (22/3/11 12:22):無特別用咩措詞修飾

水無月 楓 (22/3/11 12:23):如果一念對手就跟唔轍個畫面

>> C妹 (22/3/11 11:18):

>>我自己寫完一段

>>會不停讀順去改

>>所以都改好耐😂

>>好多時會塞住

這個我同人對話反而多

520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF8aLe8pUfR

水無月 楓 (22/3/11 12:25):打小說我一次過將畫面記下，之後再全篇修整

水無月 楓 (22/3/11 12:25):個人來說這樣會統一啲

水無月 楓 (22/3/11 12:26):而且重點係可以集中啲

水無月 楓 (22/3/11 12:27):畫畫我就真係會改到每一忽啱心水先繼續，因為係畫面定格了

水無月 楓 (22/3/11 12:28):無流動就唔使把握時間

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要好好檢討一下自己一直的自以為是才行！

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