I didn't want to comment on each chapter yet because I didn't want to lose my focus on it until I've read to where you last updated. So your story is really good. Like, you have a way to describe and make things fall into place, as well as connect the characters so that they don't feel left out in a way. I've read from the first and to the current one and I got really hooked up on the way how you let each chapter flow. You inserted flashbacks and just pretty much fill any loophole (as far as I noticed, there isn't any loophole) just so the story and scenes fit.
You told the story in a way that makes readers understand and see how each character progressed and came to from their past to how they are now. The characters are like a love hate relationship to me; Christy is such a bitch and I hate her but I also can't hate her because she's been through messed up stuffs a lot which so you can see how she's bitter, angry and vengeful like that. Heck, Paige, Christy, Carter, James, Mark and Selah have been through a lot so it's understandable from where they came from, although the things that some of them (especially Christy and Carter - gosh they're so hateful) did aren't okay for some of it.
I like James and Selah and it makes me chuckle when I read about their silly little things. I dislike Carter because he's such a jerk and all about the comments he made about the girls but then you showed how it kinda made him like that was because of his mom.
You also brought some real issues to the story which shows how the characters deal with and how they were shaped by such things. The plot and character development are good flow for the story and I can't wait to know how this story ends. I feel like I wanna say more about the story but I can't think of any right now (they're all good feedbacks like the ones above which is like some essay, sorry) Great work, keep it up! :)
P.S Oh yeah, I like most of the songs you posted above and they are some of my favourites too ^_^
Oh my gosh, you have no idea how much your feedback means to me!!! It honestly felt like I was posting my book on this website for no reason, but now I have a legit reason!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far, but sadly I have to take the next couple of weeks off due to finals and moving. :( Over the summer I'll definitely have enough time for faster updates. And again thank you soooo much for reading!!!
@Nocturne, Yay and it's not a prob, really! Just take your time though :D I saw the update that I bookmarked so I'm moving on to the next chapter now~ :)
You told the story in a way that makes readers understand and see how each character progressed and came to from their past to how they are now. The characters are like a love hate relationship to me; Christy is such a bitch and I hate her but I also can't hate her because she's been through messed up stuffs a lot which so you can see how she's bitter, angry and vengeful like that. Heck, Paige, Christy, Carter, James, Mark and Selah have been through a lot so it's understandable from where they came from, although the things that some of them (especially Christy and Carter - gosh they're so hateful) did aren't okay for some of it.
I like James and Selah and it makes me chuckle when I read about their silly little things. I dislike Carter because he's such a jerk and all about the comments he made about the girls but then you showed how it kinda made him like that was because of his mom.
You also brought some real issues to the story which shows how the characters deal with and how they were shaped by such things. The plot and character development are good flow for the story and I can't wait to know how this story ends. I feel like I wanna say more about the story but I can't think of any right now (they're all good feedbacks like the ones above which is like some essay, sorry)
Great work, keep it up! :)
P.S Oh yeah, I like most of the songs you posted above and they are some of my favourites too ^_^
I'm gonna post Chapter 19 right about now!
I saw the update that I bookmarked so I'm moving on to the next chapter now~ :)