Yay! I'm so happy to hear! Um sorry for the length. I've tried to keep chapters short when doing the revisions. Anything you think carried for longer than it should have or any suggestions that could improve length yet keep it interesting?
@AlisiaLanet, I think that the paragraph where the Emperor's betrothed asks him to dance would be a good place to end chapter one, and the open chapter two with the paragraph where "The evening wore on."
You could add another split after he learns it's time, and the next paragraph would open chapter three with "It took a couple minutes."
You could add another split after he learns it's time, and the next paragraph would open chapter three with "It took a couple minutes."