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【最精實的詞作訓練】第一堂課：骨架
ENTRY #10
Author: 李瑶仙爱爱
Published:
Mar 23, 2026
【最精實的詞作訓練】第一堂課：骨架
Published:
Mar 23, 2026
ENTRY #10
我們說好不哭的
Author: 李瑶仙爱爱
Published:
Mar 23, 2026
1 Min Read
429 Words
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凌晨兩點的便利商店

妳愛的那款啤酒還擺在架上面

我買了兩罐坐在門口的台階

風很冷才發現只剩我一個人喝

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還記得那件被雨淋濕的外套

妳說妳會一直帶著不會丟掉

我們總搶最後一口的冰淇淋

笑著說誰讓步誰就輸掉

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手機裡的對話停在妳說晚安

那是三天前的事我還在翻

妳換了新的髮型我最後一個知道

原來不愛了都是這樣靜悄悄

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妳說妳會一直帶著那件濕掉的外套

可現在雨下得好大我卻只能一個人躲好

原來妳的溫柔早已偷偷在退潮

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我們說好不哭的不是嗎

為何眼淚還是不聽話

妳給的擁抱是短暫的煙花

絢爛過後只剩冰冷沙發

117Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdCL9GeCZiq

我們說好不哭的不是嗎

可回憶像不癒合的傷疤

我學會了一個人說笑話

卻學不會沒有妳也能好好的

117Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiHDDqVlfMa

後來聽說妳過得還不錯

我也學會不再向朋友打聽

只是偶爾經過那間便利商店

還是會習慣性買兩罐啤酒

117Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtVUAmnUZxH

我們說好不哭的不是嗎

為何眼淚還是不聽話

妳給的擁抱是短暫的煙花

絢爛過後只剩冰冷沙發

117Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgqDueUTYSx

我們說好不哭的不是嗎

可回憶像不癒合的傷疤

我學會了一個人說笑話

卻學不會沒有妳也能好好的

117Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXDQeg3YjKK

妳曾是我唯一的籌碼

現在只剩沒講完的話

和那句我愛妳困在喉嚨裡

慢慢地沙啞117Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOQrnTfWk0S

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